Have you seen any intros you really thought fell flat? Post URLs here. Here's a regrettable one. (It's actually a horrible transition into a lead but nonetheless...)
This one wasn't so bad, but I figured that starting with some type of a cliche isn't too great of an idea. Plus I don't understand how it exactly ties in with the idea of the article.
This article seemed like a little too much information crammed into one sentence. I got confused trying to follow it. http://hosted.ap.org/dynamic/stories/W/WI_HARBORING_TRIAL_WIOL-?SITE=WIMAD&SECTION=HOME&TEMPLATE=DEFAULT
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This one didn't really make sense to me, most likely because I wasn't familiar with the quote. I guess I would say it was pretty weak.
http://www.madison.com/wsj/home/opinion/293327
Not only did this article open with a question, but it's initial answer was vague and left me frustratingly still questioning.
http://www.madison.com/cityguide/
http://www.nytimes.com/2008/06/29/theater/29simo.html
This one was a little too wordy and had to follow, but not terrible
opps I meant 'hard'
http://www.usnews.com/articles/news/2007/12/20/technologys-morning-after.html
It was sort of a weird beginning, I felt like it was supposed to be a joke, but it wasn't funny.
This one wasn't so bad, but I figured that starting with some type of a cliche isn't too great of an idea. Plus I don't understand how it exactly ties in with the idea of the article.
http://www.newsweek.com/id/143740
This one was so boring. It never caught my attention and I never even bothered finishing it...
http://www.nytimes.com/2008/07/01/washington/01electrocute.html?ref=world
This article seemed like a little too much information crammed into one sentence. I got confused trying to follow it.
http://hosted.ap.org/dynamic/stories/W/WI_HARBORING_TRIAL_WIOL-?SITE=WIMAD&SECTION=HOME&TEMPLATE=DEFAULT
This article is really boring and technical. I didn't want to finish it after the first sentence!
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